Black and White
A Noir Christmas
The snow fell lightly in the darkness as I trudged along the slowly whitening sidewalk. The sound of my steps marking a lonely rhythm in the night air, my stomach clenched in ever-tightening knots.
Why did this have to happen on Christmas Eve?
I saw him long before he recognized me. Once he did, hope briefly flickered in his eyes till my jaw tightened and I hardened my gaze.
We stood together under a streetlamp, neither of us speaking for several minutes. After trying to light a coffin-nail two or three times, his lighter throwing a few feeble sparks, I struck a match, gently hiding the flame with my hand while he puffed, the end of his cigarette glowing in the pale light.
I can see the answer in your eyes, Tommy, Mike muttered.
Well ... you really screwed up this time, I replied bitterly.
That bad?
Christ, Mike. You fucked the boss's girlfriend.
Could a been worse, at least it wasn't his wife, he said with a snicker.
I laughed in spite of myself, and he flashed his wicked boy grin. Oh, the girls loved him alright. They lapped that shit up.
Damn it, Mike, you're not making this any easier.
So, get on with it already.
He looked at me unflinchingly, his hard gaze a strange combination of angry and sad.
Then he smiled just before crumpling to the snowy walk. My shoulders shaking with the pistol still smoking in my hand, I whispered, Goodbye baby brother. Goodbye.
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John Cox
Twisted writer of mind bending tales. I never met a myth I didn't love or a subject that I couldn't twist out of joint. I have a little something for almost everyone here. Cept AI. Ain't got none of that.
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By Paul Stewart7 days ago in Fiction
A Mother’s Fight: The Night Her Children Vanished
It was a quiet Thursday night when Maya Fernandez first noticed something was wrong. Her apartment, usually alive with the soft breathing of her children, Lucas (7) and Ana (5), was silent. The faint ticking of the wall clock sounded unnervingly loud. Maya’s heart thudded in her chest as she called out their names, her voice trembling: “Lucas? Ana?” No answer. A cold dread filled her chest. She rushed to their rooms—empty beds. Toys scattered, blankets tossed aside—but the children were gone. Panic surged, her hands shaking as she dialed her husband’s number. No answer. Her mind raced. Where could they be? Was this a random act of violence? Or something far more calculated? She knew instinctively: time was critical. Maya ran to the window, scanning the quiet streets below. Nothing. The city seemed asleep, indifferent to her terror. Every passing second stretched like an eternity. She grabbed a flashlight and retraced her children’s steps from earlier in the evening. Every corridor, every alley, every familiar corner became a potential clue. And then—a faint sound. A tiny giggle, almost swallowed by the night air. Maya’s pulse jumped. Could it really be them? She followed the sound cautiously, heart racing. The trail led to a small playground behind her apartment complex. The swings moved gently in the wind, casting long shadows under the dim streetlights. There they were: Lucas and Ana, huddled together, eyes wide with fear. The relief was instant, but fleeting. A shadow moved just beyond the glow of the lamppost. Someone had been watching, someone who knew her family’s routines intimately. Maya scooped them into her arms, tears streaming down her face. She whispered promises she had been clinging to all night: “You are safe now. I will never let anything happen to you.” The next morning, Maya began piecing together what had happened. She realized that the person who had taken her children was someone close, someone who knew their lives well. The betrayal cut deeper than the fear itself. Maya refused to be paralyzed by dread. She contacted the authorities, installed cameras, and enlisted the help of neighbors. Her relentless vigilance gradually unveiled small but crucial clues: strange phone calls, unrecognized visitors, and inconsistencies in stories she had once trusted. Every discovery brought renewed hope—and renewed fear. She knew the perpetrator was still out there, watching, waiting. Weeks passed. Maya’s efforts never wavered. She traveled to nearby towns, speaking to anyone who might have seen her children. She studied patterns, questioned strangers, and followed leads that seemed trivial but often proved essential. One late evening, she received a tip from a local shopkeeper—a child matching Lucas’s description had been seen near an abandoned warehouse. Maya’s heart raced. She didn’t hesitate. Alone, she drove there, her children’s voices echoing in her mind. The warehouse was empty, but in a hidden corner, she found a small blanket and a toy that belonged to Ana. Her hope surged. She was close. She could feel it. Finally, after months of searching, Maya located the children in a distant neighborhood, living under the watch of someone who had planned to keep them hidden. The reunion was overwhelming. Tears, laughter, disbelief, and sheer relief collided as Maya embraced her children, refusing to let go. Though safe, the ordeal left lasting scars. Maya became hyper-aware, cautious, and protective—but also stronger, braver, and more determined than ever. The experience taught her a profound lesson: love can push you beyond fear, doubt, and exhaustion. Her story spread through her community, inspiring other parents to trust their instincts and fight tirelessly for their children. For Maya, the memory of that night remains vivid—the fear, the despair, but ultimately, the triumph of unbreakable maternal love. Even years later, she reflects on that terrifying night, reminding herself and others: hope can endure even in the darkest hours, and sometimes a mother’s courage is the most powerful force in the world. Disclaimer: This story is inspired by documented real-life parental struggles and emotional suspense cases, but all names, locations, and personal identifiers have been fictionalized for privacy and storytelling purposes. Certain events and dialogue have been adapted for narrative engagement, while maintaining the essence of a mother’s determination and emotional journey. This article is intended for entertainment, inspiration, and human-interest reading, not as a legal or investigative report.
By Baseer Shaheen 5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (40)
Powerful dark sad images! Congratulations on Top Story!
John, only you could pack suck complexity in under 250 words. I once had a professor explain to us that endings should surprise, but that they should also make logical sense; the reader should say to themself, "That's exactly what's supposed to happen." I think you've mastered that here.
Well damn, that was unexpected, and I loved it. I appreciated how well you used the dialogue to flesh out these characters so quickly. Wonderful work, congrats on top story :)
You are a delicious discovery for me today! I subscribed. I am reading away on Mondays and Wednesdays now. Writing away with just winks and nods the rest of the week.
Oh damn. That's one way to deal with a problem. This was incredibly captivating and loved your exquisite use of descriptions in such a short piece. Remarkable writing again, John and another fine entry. Congrats on this getting Top Story, it's stunning.
So glad this got Top Story! Well deserved!🥰
Cruel twist.
Came back for another read. I really like this.
Congrats :)
GASP!! What a fabulous job of a terribly tragic tale
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congratulations on your Top Story!
this was awesome
Whoa. Stark. Harsh. Perfect setting, under a streetlamp. The last sentence got me. I think it stunned everyone, even after we figured out what was going to happen. Yikes.
Whoa, that’s definitely black and white justice! Love the coffin-nail foreshadowing. Brilliant use of suspense. Great micro!!
Oh wow! Exceptional writing. Congrats on top story! It is well deserved!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Love the gangster vibe in this winter setting, and what a twist! “My shoulders shaking with the pistol still smoking in my hand” is a powerful line says a lot.
John, I pictured Robert Mitchum and Richard Conte on that snowy street. You may be our next Dashiell Hammett! Let's bring noir back in fashion. Congrats on TS, this is amazing!
Excellent tale. Congrats!!!
Nice. It had that 40's gangster movie vibe
Congrats on Top Story!!!
Compelling writing!! You had me on the edge of my seat till the tragic ending- well- earned T.S.!
Congrats on Top Story!!!
Fabulous work! Keep it up—congratulations!