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Been thinking a lot about drinking, lately. Not least because of a recent episode of over-indulgence and the inevitable after effects. Some readers may recall the earlier articles I wrote about beating the booze. Here I set out an experiment in techniques for cutting down on my alcohol intake. The experiment was successful, the techniques worked, and I have armed myself with an arsenal of weapons in the war against the demon drink. I have yet to fire the first round however. It's all a question of timing (perhaps procrastination).
By Raymond G. Taylor6 days ago in Psyche
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Nicely done!
I don't really understand the context here, so sorry 😅😅
The flow of the poem feels almost like a wistful breath, and the choice of words adds such depth to the emotions you're conveying. It's a touching exploration of love, separation, and the hope of one day being reunited. Thank you for sharing this poignant and beautifully written piece. It really resonated with me.
Wonderfully written. But I don't find it too sad, I actually find it uplifting
Oh this has such a beautiful melancholy sense of loss to it, and so lyrical too! Wonderful poem, Spinstress!