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making the journey
in quiet soft harmony
crystallize white snow
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Comments (8)
Great Haiku! so beautifully written.
Great job on describing the joy of the first snow fall.
What a great haiku! Thank you!😊💕
This was absolutely gorgeous! Loved your Haiku!
You have written such a picturesque poem perfect for the coming season.
The words are even more beautiful that that photo...wow
The snows of November are postcards from January!
Snow is indeed harmonious. A great haiku, Daphne.