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Sore Loser

your ego's broken

By Luna JordanPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
Sore Loser
Photo by Igor Omilaev on Unsplash

With tears

staining your

cheeks,

you look

so small.

*

You’re the

king of nothing,

I hope you fall.

*

You should

cut your losses

and walk away,

But I don’t think

you ever hear

a word I say.

*

Oh, look,

you’re crying

on the floor.

I’ve seen it all

and I want more.

*

You’re a sore loser,

whining all night.

Yelling at some shadows,

giving me delight.

You’re a sore loser,

screaming up at the sky.

Your ego’s broken,

oh my my my.

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About the Creator

Luna Jordan

I create stories and poems, and am known for deleting them if I start finding them cringey.

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  • Caitlin Charlton6 months ago

    Damn. Who is this about. I want to ask. I am okay without an answer. I love the mischievousness of this poem. The photo is very fitting too. Quite the irony there. 🤗❤️

  • Hahahahahahaha unfortunately, there's so many people like this. Loved your poem!

  • Mark Graham6 months ago

    You are not a sore loser you are whom you are supposed to be at any given time and maybe you will be a sore loser once in a while who knows.

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