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Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

Day 12/30: A series where I write a poem every single day for 30 days.

By Maryam BatoolPublished 7 months ago • 1 min read
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Twinkle Twinkle Little Star,

Hey, sparkly! Please, fill up my jar!

How I wonder what you are?

Can you give me a chocolate bar?

Up above the world so High!

Would you take me with you to fly?

Like a diamond in the sky!

Let's float in the heaven before I die

Twinkle Twinkle little star!

Hey, Angel! Can you fix my scar?

Would you take me far? I am so sad

I'm a little child, I lost my mom and dad

Up above world is so dark

Without my mom, I don't see no spark

They tell me, Dad one day will come

I know he won't, I am no Dumb

I know I don't sleep in my mom's lap

I know it's a lie, I know it's a trap

Like a diamond in the sky

They're not up there, and I know why

Twinkle Twinkle Little Star,

I know you're a star, you're not where they are!

But, twinkle twinkle, you little thing!

Where do I find them, where do I begin?

I miss them a lot, they are my world

Without them, you see, my life is whirled

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A/N:

How are you doing? I hope, greatt! Thank you for reading :)

Stream of Consciousnesssad poetry

About the Creator

Maryam Batool

Turned 18!

I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others

Life's HARD, trust me! I'm already a little tired. But, I gotta live anyway!

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Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Karan w. 7 months ago

    Wow! This is such a sweet poem, but there is a lot of sadness in this, and I really loved this one-sided conversational imagery with the little star. šŸ‘

  • Calvin London7 months ago

    That was very cute, Maryam. Almost halfway there!!!

  • Oh wow, at first it was fun and then it became sad. Loved your poem!

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