Midsummer Eve morning, 2022
frail silhouette doll
two-dimensional body
lies midst junipers
About the Creator
Cristal S.
I've noticed that when I follow the path I enjoy most, I often end up swimming upstream. So here I am, right in the middle of it – writing about it all and more. ♡
@cristals.word.drawer
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Comments (4)
The poem feels like a snapshot almost like stumbling upon a moment rather than being told a story. The junipers ground it in a real place, which makes the figure in the grass feel more mysterious. I kept wondering who or what that doll really represents.
I have to agree with Dharrsheena. I see Cinderella in the photo. Very clever wording.
Omggg your shadow definitely looks like a doll. Like Cinderella in her ball gown with her hair up 😍😍😍😍😍😍
Beautiful 😍